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Comment on publication: From the cycle “It's good for Fathers” No. 10: Instead
I want to write a lot - because the story has caused a lot of conflicting emotions. But I will keep it with me. Real Nastya can only become Tamila if they love. Thank you for Nastya, for the fact that she won with her love and tenderness.
Comment on publication: Jack and Jackie. Part 3: Home
No, just another last part, in which the girl was born) That's all.
About the link - I do not know. Most likely, this is a glitch. Write on the forum, there will help.
Comment on publication: Jack and Jackie. Part 3: Home
Man!
And now I want to continue)
You are welcome!
Comment on publication: Jack and Jackie. Part 2: Akash
Man!
What are you up to ?!)
The second part is more beautiful than the first!
And this story is not the place - forgive me, my favorite PT!)
It is an urgent need to publish a separate book in all possible formats. And I'll buy paper) I will re-read and admire the beautiful volume. I rarely buy paper books - only my favorite.
This is what you create - now you are not just among my favorite authors PT, you are generally one of my favorite writers.
You are lucky that you are not with me near me - I am so emotional that I could literally cuddle you in my arms from delight)
I'm waiting for the product !!! But first I read both parts again)
Comment on publication: Jack and Jackie. Part 1: Escape
Well, if it requires ...) And it seems to me, the sale is not needed. Still clearly over. They got married) And if you write further, just how they were found. New round? If I were the author, I probably would not continue. Actually, it pulls into a full-fledged novel. On the topic and on the plot. But then this is not a story for PT.
Comment on publication: Jack and Jackie. Part 1: Escape
Again surprised)
The story is very emotional - for me: I read and my heart ached from pain. At first I felt sorry for the guy, and then I cried right when I found out that Dad and Daughter worked.
For me here is not erotic (although it is full), for me the moral aspect is more important. And in your stories he is always there. But here it sounds especially piercing.
And really liked the end. Thank!
Comment on publication: From the cycle “It is good for Fathers” No. 9: Tatyana, dear Tatyana
Each - his)))) And why not here?
Comment on publication: From the cycle “It is good for Fathers” No. 9: Tatyana, dear Tatyana
Meeting with the heroine and their first time - just catharsis)
He was betrayed by treason, but it is quite justified from the point of view of the plot. I would be surprised if he had not changed)
In short, I had enough of everything. Very sensual, emotional, touching in every sense of the story, written with a touch of humor. Your signature style in all its glory! Dragged to favorites) Thank you!
Comment on publication: From the cycle “It's good for Fathers” No. 8: Debut
Yes)
In general, according to the story - purely my feelings - they should not be together. Something is ... a certain tension in Yulia, and in the Field too. They were tied more by momentary passion, but not by the movement of the soul. However, he had something in his heart - he could not resist her youth, was touched, sentimental ... But no, this is not love! It will pass, IMHO.
Comment on publication: From the cycle “It's good for Fathers” No. 8: Debut
And I immediately answered) Atypically, probably, but if you are crazy about him, why pull?