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Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 7
In an hour by a teaspoon? Well, you give! And it seemed to me, I quickly spread. This is a moderator's test for a day or two.
And usually ... yes no, I always post when everything is already written. Not in my habit to throw out the chapter, and then for two weeks to write the next one. But someone and with such periodicity lays out.
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 6
Eugene, 7 and 8 on check. I think there will be normal speakers.
Well, it's time for the final. By the way, why is the girl so passionate? Well, I was based on the fact that Angela, somewhere French, somewhere Latina. Of course, their women are hotter than our Russian compatriots. And the Cubans, for example, so in general - the bomb! Even generally young. Friends have been there - told.
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 5
About financial heating ... I do not even know. Money is not the most important thing for me. The main thing that people like my stories. Of course, not every chapter manages to keep the bar high. Here you write that it became less interesting. Yes, I admit. Well, so the plot turned and as it seemed to me everything is logically reasonable. The final is just around the corner, I hope it will not disappoint you, as the whole story as a whole.
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 4
Hmm ... By imperceptible approximation, I did not paint. I did not think it was so important for the plot. The mercenaries knew who was flying, they knew the route. The Executioner's man on the Victor 16 could have put some kind of crap on the hull to disguise the mercenary ships. Or something else. Do you think this should be sharpened and entered into the text?
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 1
And I greet you Eugene.
Nice to see your comments below the text.
I have a fantasy and a story with a moderate amount of sex or even without it. But it is under a different name and on other sites. Here the subject obliges.
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 4
The story is already written in full. Everything in its place. What else can I do? Who is destined to die - he will die. Who is destined to live that - will survive.
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 3
Here is a piece of chapter 3: “Those especially strong and hot feelings, which are usually called love, Radimtsev did not feel for Witte. But her loss was answered in his heart by pain, but in his soul by bitterness. almost as strong as the loss of a mother once was. She died of the virus, like all women of the human race. ” The answer to the origin of Radimtsev.
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 2
Well, then she rose while the Executioner was undressing. Do you think it was necessary to register?
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 2
Continuation will be but more on that later.
Comment on publication: Fight for the future. Chapter 1
And you greet the Queen!
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