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Comment on publication: Friend's sister
not bad, very nice. but for the future - clearly do not indicate the age of the student, in the process of telling already hints enough. here they can punish for it
the truth is lately, the local admins are not going to such trifles
Comment on publication: Start a happy life
The story is unkempt, the main character is Olya, then Sasha, of course, it is interesting to read.
Comment on publication: Meeting classmates
How the transcript of the meeting read
Comment on publication: Anonymous Part 2: Mystery opens
Stretched somehow and the motivation of the heroes is not very enough, especially the main character. GG then beats, then strokes, some unbalanced. His plan is not clear, why he leaked Lena, would use the gift of fate, I hope the author will explain in the following parts. Nine in the evaluation threw, but it is more like an advance.
Comment on publication: Two
Thank you all, praised my story, a special thank you to those who responded in the comments.
Comment on publication: Case in student years
brevity is the sister of talent, but not on this site
Comment on publication: Unforgettable smoke break
Directly suggests a continuation, like in the morning, this Vika, bringing out her daughter, sees GG and tries to remember something, but the memories elude her. In fact, a good seed for the further development of dating is no longer drunk.
Comment on publication: In the train. Part 2
As for some incoherence of motivation of characters - probably you need to sit down and write a story without a long break, so that their motivation in my head keeps. This time unfortunately did not work.
Comment on publication: In the train. Part 2
For me, the most important thing is the first contact between the characters, then somehow it becomes boring to describe, therefore there is only one act. Well, I will work in this direction - another time with other heroes.
Comment on publication: In the train. Part 2
In principle, I waited for someone to tell the minuses of the story, thanks for the detailed justification of the assessment