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Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 3: Falconry

Snake, ratings speak for themselves. And, by the way, one of the five people who were not “hooked on” by the story, who did not appreciate the idea and the ease of reading, most likely simply did not pay attention to these “ticks” - I think the authors of the site should change the design a bit. Almost everything can be agreed with Eugene, except, perhaps, mystics - this topic is touched on in passing, and I suspect it will be revealed in continuation with the same brilliance. We wait!

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: Nightmare on vacation Jill

I did not find the continuation of the original story on the Internet, I think that it does not exist. It seems to me wrong to continue the continuation myself, not only because of possible copyright infringement, but also due to the difficulties of preserving the author's style in the sequel. In addition, it seemed to me that the topic was more or less disclosed in the first part, and a further increase in the volume of the text can only damage its quality.
And yet, what could be the continuation? The first and second parts mention the game of polo. Most likely, the new inhabitants of a small wonderful country in this game play not the last place. It can even be assumed that the horses traditionally used in the game of polo will be completely bright color :). Of course, their clothes, as is customary in horses, will not be laid. It is very likely that some of the servants will train the newly arrived animals, but it is possible that this will be one of the owners, or even Senor Campario himself. It is clear that for various blemishes horses will be punished, and these punishments should be quite diverse ...
Further may depend on the plans of the family of owners. If, as promised on arrival, these plans do not extend in time longer than the end of the season, then the girls may be let go, although something tells me that they will definitely return as the long-haired blonde returned. If not, they will be lodged on the farm all the time, and depending on their abilities and diligence, they will be decided on their insemination or, on the contrary, sterilization. It is clear that both procedures will be carried out publicly, with a large gathering of people and with a broadcast on a special local TV channel ...
In general, you can come up with many interesting things, but I will not do it. If, however, someone wants to write a sequel, then the flag in his hands and all that :))

• Rating: 2

Comment on publication: Nightmare on vacation Jill

The original story had a second part. It seemed to me less interesting (and, not least, laziness affected), and I did not translate it.
In short - the second part contains several almost independent episodes. In the first, Jill, led on a leash by Suzy, meets a group of girls dressed in tiny, little-colored, red skirts, white socks and tight white shirts. All are tall blondes, under the leadership of a short, dark-haired, strict girl, not older than themselves, but obviously local.
In the second episode, they, along with duzhim the billower Ramon, apparently, as a servant of Suzy, catch an elegant young lady, who turns out to be a foreigner and a blonde in actual fact - she is trying to run away from her local husband, who has deceived her into this country.The process of exposing (in both senses) the fugitive is described in some detail.
Then all four naked captives are brought into the back of a truck for transporting horses and tied tightly, putting leather straps between their legs and, of course, leaving places of interest open and in plain sight. A truck with large side windows at the bottom of the body (obviously, for the convenience of being outside the audience) starts to move, and at traffic lights Jill sees scenes from local life. First, they meet a girl who is chatting with friends and leading like a dog on a leash a beautiful blonde (naked, of course). When she goes to her mistress on all fours (obviously, it is forbidden to walk for two), everyone sees her highly raised ass, hairless lips, large swinging breasts and her face bright red with shame. At the next stop, they see the scene of the purchase of another blond girl by an older gentleman with a daughter. The girl is shown to a potential buyer - they twist each other, bend, then the seller, a young man praising his goods, pushes her buttocks apart, and an elderly gentleman inserts her index finger into the exposed back hole, pulls him out with a laugh and offers to do the same to her daughter; the girl wriggles with shame ...
Seeing all these humiliations, Jill imagines herself in the place of poor victims and under the influence of leather belts, constantly rubbing her unprotected sensitive places, despite all attempts to resist, she experiences the strongest orgasm in her life, to the amusement of Suzy and Ramon and to her surprise surprising friends. . And life goes on, and still ahead ...

• Rating: 2