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Comment on publication: My homemade slut
I was very bothered to read the author’s illiteracy ... the idea was good, but I agree with the comment above - somehow everything was crumpled up and turned out flat ... and the author’s vocabulary pumped up ... what was described could be painted in such colors ... and here - only a pencil sketch turned out.
Comment on publication: I waited
Thank you :) It's nice that you enjoyed it :)