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Comment on publication: What men say in the sauna

In the zoo, a camel did not want to spit in my mother-in-law, as I did not ask him, and to top it all licked a giraffe. After the zoo, everyone was happy, small, Julia, mother-in-law with father-in-law and even a giraffe, all but me. I could barely wipe from his saliva. - for this one paragraph deserved 10))

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Comment on publication: In captivity ... Part 5: Bitch

Here it is not that one is good and the other is bad, they are both bad. And they did not try to punish anyone or to defend, just one piranha ate another and that's it.
And GG was already taken to prison for 20 years, I doubt that he can survive 20 years in prison and come back to take revenge.

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Comment on publication: In captivity ... Part 5: Bitch

I think sex with Sterva is a manifestation of animal desires, but I don’t imagine myself without a mat ... as far as I remember with Olya there is no mate in the series - so in my opinion it’s somehow correct.
And the path of the hero in fact has already ended in part 7. I have ideas for 8 parts: prison and last for the hero, but there is no time.
In any case, ATP for a detailed comment - always very motivated to be creative)

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Comment on publication: Captured by love. Part 7

Honestly, I have no idea how cho is going on there))) apparently with the precinct I got stuck?)) Well, God be with him ... it’s not my most important thing
Thanks for the comment)

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Comment on publication: Our first experience! Part 5

And, as for me, part 3 was the best: sex was best described in the second, but 3 was interesting precisely by how her husband would react, how not to react and, to be honest, I would very much wait for the more interesting continuation of part 3. I can not believe that such a sharp dip in the swing did not cause any problems for her husband and wife. and a description of such problems and ways to overcome them, as for me it would be much more interesting than the description of sex with strangers and so on.
And, in general, you write, of course, delightful)

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Comment on publication: Our first experience! Part 5

There is still a cunt, a hole, mezhdunozhe, gap, forage cap ...

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