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Comment on publication: Cold and darkness (based on the work "Goblin Killer")

There will be no continuation, the fate of the character sword maiden (sword maiden) is spelled out in the original.
But I would be grateful if you describe exactly what you considered strong and what needs to be corrected. What to add and generally what you would like to read in the next story.

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Comment on publication: Cold and darkness (based on the work "Goblin Killer")

That seems to be the problem. While I am writing, it constantly seems to me that I make too many descriptions and drag out the story, so I begin to delete something.
It is very difficult to collect feedback, so I am very grateful for the comments.

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Comment on publication: Cold and darkness (based on the work "Goblin Killer")

She is one of two characters in the entire series who basically have a background. The rest is just a functional application. Although in the anime, she didn’t go much farther and her story line was very sharply turned using a letter. In the manga, this was not. It is a pity that they approached each other perfectly.

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Comment on publication: Gamer. Part 2

Naturally. I plan to post on Thursday or Friday.

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Comment on publication: Gamer. Part 2

Rechecked the whole story and did not find any errors ... hmm ...

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