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Comment on publication: I will be your angel ...
Thank. I did not expect such a response. Not everyone can feel the despair that has spilled on paper. And it is doubly pleasant when someone understands and feels it.
Thanks again for such a high rating.
Comment on publication: Swan geese. Part 1
Very strong story from the first line to the last. It was written in a scorching way emotionally and beautifully, without any flowery-artistic delights, but with precise associative definitions that enhance the perception and sensations from what was read The main thing is that you managed to leave readers indifferent and confirmation of this is the comments left.
Your story; - another confirmation that love must be fought for. And the fact that such stories leave their bright trace, making you think, the highest praise to the talented author.
Do not stop there - this is only the first step on the ladder of creativity and self-expression. Move on stepping higher. You - you can, you - be able to. You have everything for this. And new fans of your creativity - too.
Comment on publication: All she needs
I am not writing yet - there is no time for that. But, I think my muse will soon remind of itself. And maybe not in vain sadness, if it translates into such verses. The main thing is that emotions should not be replaced by indifference and indifference, then the muse will not leave us without attention.
Comment on publication: All she needs
I like your poems. They are always very bright and to the point. I do not dare to talk about everything that you have written, I confess I did not read everything, only selectively. But after reading, I still remember them for a long time, sometimes I reread it. And how you are able to convey emotions and feelings, not everyone can. Thank you for making your poems happy. Agree, finally, with your Muse and write and please everyone who is waiting for your creations.
And the ending is unexpected and sadness ...
Comment on publication: The law of the genre
But in my opinion, a very touching and gentle story. But everyone judges to the best of their depravity and perception of the relationship between a man and a woman. Personally, I like both GG. You showed the wonderful world of the heroine - behind an unusual strength and boyish appearance, hid insecurity, vulnerability and the very femininity that can only appear next to the man she was waiting for. And yes, you are right: sex, tied with love in a tight knot, gives both strength and revives and inspires and changes and creates miracles. And this is not only a fairy tale ...
That's right, a fairy tale, it should remain a fairy tale, because they feed our imagination, our images that are born in our heads and our desires, which are equal to a fairy tale, but how often we strive to realize it in reality. We dream of a fairy tale and look for her all his life.
Fall in love with your heroines and fall in love with us, and we will all be happy ... and many of us will have the desire to come closer to her.
Thank you ... they gave us a wonderful evening ... (I read the night before, but I could write just now) ......
Comment on publication: Madness
Wonderful story. An explosive mixture of feelings that very accurately conveyed: bitterness, despair, and hope ... The pain of loss and the thirst for life. There are a lot of really strong women, but few men can understand not only their strength, but all that is attached to it. You were able to feel and convey to others the world of feelings, experiences, pain and desires of a woman who has lost her beloved, but has not lost herself.
Thank you, written beautifully and with feeling.
Comment on publication: Old master's lesson
I like your beautiful expression language. The story is easy to read and the plot is unusual and interesting. But, I did not feel the thrill of feeling. You read the story as a manual on sports and a description of the love scene, is perceived the same way. There is no that tenderness and interest of the partners towards each other, which should have sounded at least at the end. It turned out very dry, neither the brightness nor the impression of intimacy was felt. And the phrase - “Here's my house, next to him.” - is not emotionally colored, rather sounds like a statement of fact. A little more emotion would give a bright coloring and sensuality to this story.
But, I really like your work and I follow with interest the appearance of your new stories. Therefore, put the highest score, although I know - you can do better.))
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Comment on publication: Present
Very unusual and very mixed feelings. I did not have enough disclosure of the plot. There are a lot of understatement and a lot of questions. In my opinion you have a splash of some feelings. Something boiled and poured into the story. But this is my feeling.
Perhaps you are planning a sequel, where everything will fall into place. For now - thoughts, digestion, questions, no answers and some confusion ...
I did not give a rating, because she herself had not yet understood the sensations from the story.
But, your readers are always with you !!!))
Comment on publication: Excellent and bully
Aaaaaaaaaaaa !!! I understood: “Always there is a place for the Returnee.” - this is your signature, like the painter’s pen’s stroke at the bottom of the picture.)))
Comment on publication: Gray mouse. Part 2
Sorcerer.))) Believe me, even for lovely and beautiful, such a fantasy is an unfulfilled dream. You always want a number of strong man who knows what he wants and can give it despite objections and constraints. Yes, often the constraint and uncertainty of a woman (not ostentatious, not as an element of the game, but a natural one) confuses a man and he is lost, or in a misunderstanding, retreats, or does not behave quite adequately. And you, somehow everything is correct, interesting, exciting, exciting, and exactly as most women would like. These are my emotions and feelings after reading the story.
I think you are largely consistent with your own image described in your stories and I can only envy the one next to you.)) Maybe I’m wrong, but I want to believe that such men still exist :-))
(in a whisper) although sometimes you are a little too far, sometimes cruel, but this corresponds to the needs of ST.
Continue if you yourself are interested, but do not forget to rest, so as not to write out and disappoint the waiting audience.))
10 + 10 + 10? - for your stories))))