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swallowed the bolt of this guy, and he was very big. I fascinated looking at it all, like a porn movie. The headmistress could give form to any young porn actress, because she so diligently and so revealingly sucked dick that it seemed to me that she was sucking me already.
Her tongue slid along and across the trunk of the penis, not leaving a single millimeter of dry space on it, periodically swallowing it in the mouth almost to its full length. From a deep blowjob, her saliva flooded the whole guy's scrotum. Mother Yulia and Vika Vlasova sitting next to the boyfriend joined the process. One began to stroke the area around the penis and eggs, and the second began to massage the highly moist eggs. The headmistress had no choice but to continue sucking and licking the dick. The first could not stand Catherine Sokolova, she jumped off the seat and rudely moving the headmistress, began passionately sucking cock. Maria Pavlovna was not ready for such fierce rivalry and curled aside a little. After seeing what was happening, Vlasova also decided not to lag behind and squeezed between Yulia's mother and the seat, began to lick the eggs.
It was all so fascinating that I experienced similar sensations on my penis. My view was not possible to tear off from the whole action. The headmistress gathered her strength and began to break through to the member of this guy, whose face could not make out. And so, Catherine and Maria make a blowjob in two languages simultaneously. They stuck his dick on both sides and began to rub his own tongues. Vika could hardly fit under two women, but she still could not get rid of the eggs. After another couple of moments, the guy threw his head back and I began to peer into the visible quarter of his face. Terribly familiar face, but I still could not recognize him. At this point, a member of the guy began to actively erupt sperm. Catherine, Maria Pavlovna and Vika Vlasova, they all plentifully poured sperm. I myself began to cum from an incredibly pleasant feeling in the groin. Their faces were covered with white liquid so that even their eyes opened with difficulty. Only at this moment I was able to lower my gaze to see where and how I had finished.
Lowering my eyes, I almost twitched in surprise. In front of me, Lisa was sitting on her lap, who continued to get my cum on her face. She turns out all this time sucked me while I watched the guy. I wanted to move aside, but I was paralyzed. Examining my body, I saw that under my clothes I had a cast that covered almost my entire body, except for the head and the penis. With a fright in my eyes, I stared at the guy. He laughed, and panic filled my mind. Lisa rose to her feet and with a contented smile from which my sperm dripped, looked at the guy. The guy began to slowly turn his head in my direction. When he turned, I could not believe what was happening even more than it was. The guy was myself. I smiled to myself with a wide and contented smile. I was terrified. I got up and walked in my direction, shoving the legs of the women who were in front of him. There was something ominous about it all. When I got closer, I managed to look at myself. It was not me! My twin's eyes were purple. This kind of evil twin, I realized and wanted to warn all those present, but I could not utter no sound. I was mute. Or maybe I am the real you? She asked me.
I woke up with a sharp movement, from which I almost fell off the bed. Wow, well, no shit well myself, dream like that. - I thought. My stomach rumbled and my mouth went dry. In the bedside table there is a bottle of water and juice, but I wanted something hot. I'll go to Olga, I will ask you to boil tea, and at the same time I will try to walk. - I decided.Having gathered all the strength, I got off the bed and stood up. Well, like nothing complicated. - I was glad for my success - And now go out into the corridor. It was still difficult for me to go, so I grabbed the rack with a dropper and, leaning on it, left the ward. Olga was not behind the desk, where the nurse on duty was usually located. Strange. - I thought - Maybe she is now in another room or in the nursery? Step by step, I walked up sister. Five meters before their office, a man with gray hair and a thick gray beard with a mustache came out from there. The first impression is that this is some man's model for colognes, for he has a too colorful, manly appearance. At the same time, I caught a very strange aura and energy from it. Something is wrong. - I thought. The man closed the door behind him and stared at me. He even had gray eyes. He strained a little, meeting my gaze, then quickly examined my hands and fixed his gaze on my right hand, and then rushed past me. What is this strange feeling? - I thought, from the impossibility of identifying what I had not experienced before.
I hurried to sisterhood. Opening the door, I found 2 nurses on duty sitting on duty that day. They seemed to be asleep, but at the same time, they looked a little up from their faces, and their eyes were open. Olga? - I shouted loudly. In response, she only slowly turned her eyes on me, and then her head. Her eyes were completely empty, she looked at me, but did not see. Olga, are you all right? - I said loudly. Olga, blinked like the second nurse, after which it was as if they both came to their senses. Sonic? - She asked in surprise - What are you doing here, do not you need to be in bed and relax? I wanted hot tea, and therefore I was looking for you. - I began to explain my presence - And what was this man? The man? - she asked in surprise - What man? Well, the one that just left here a minute ago. - I explained. Sonic, there were no men here, in the sisterly entry to the public is prohibited. - she said confidently. But how is it that, just now, before entering, a gray-haired man came out of here. - I said loudly and indignantly. Sonic, I repeat, there were no men here. - Olga answered with some irritability. - Go better to yourself, and I’ll make you tea now. So what was it? - I thought indignantly, leaving the sister.
I headed to my ward. Going to the door, I reached out to open it, but she leaned on me. From my house came the same gray-haired man. Wait! - I said loudly - Who are you and what did you do with Olga? Calm down Sonic, do not shout, we'll see you again and talk. - he said in a calm voice. - And now, excuse me, I have to hurry, otherwise I will not have time to get around everyone. On these words, the man rushed to the exit, and after a couple of seconds, he was already gone. As soon as he was gone, the sensation of strange energy ceased. What the? - spinning in my head. I entered the ward and saw Alexander lying on his bed. His face was as empty as the nurses. Alexander, are you okay? - I turned to him - What did he do to you? Alexander lay in the same condition for several moments, and then began to recover. And what? - he asked - as if he did not hear me - are you talking about? Clear. - I said quietly - It seemed to me, or was someone here now? What? - he was surprised - No, there was no one, only you left a few minutes ago and now came back. Well, I understood that. - I said and lay down on the bed. So what the hell is going on here? - I thought.
Dear readers! I am very happy to publish a new part of my story, I really hope that you all will like it.
For reference, I remind you that according to the rules of the site, the previous parts of the work are readable only by registered readers, so please, if you are interested in reading the 3rd part, just read the previous ones first.
A very big request, if for some reason you didn’t like my story and you want to give a low rating, be sure to write me what exactly you didn’t like, in a comment or a personal message, to all messages, to all of you. This will greatly help me in the future to do so, to make my story even more interesting for all readers.
P.S. Those who are waiting for the continuation of my story on a regular basis (every month) are not willing, but have to upset.
In connection with the change of work and other life circumstances, I have much less free time. Therefore, it turned out delays in writing the text and publication.
The third part is 47 pages in the 12th font, which is less than the past, but still remains one of the most voluminous stories of those that are presented here.
I do not throw the text, and I will continue to write further, I am interested in writing, I do it for the soul, but I can’t do this every free minute.
I want to warn you right away that there will definitely be a continuation, but it will probably be in a couple of months. During this time I will try to collect my thoughts and form a weighty plot part.
If you, my readers, have ideas, wishes, or just want to discuss, write, do not hesitate. I will be happy to discuss any idea.
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Cool series. Good syllable. As for me, a big plus is that the author does not slip into vulgarity (in the bad sense of the word) and there are no obvious grand pianos that implement the Wishlist of the hero at the first click of the fingers.
PS thank you for the series.
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I am very glad that my ideas are positively evaluated by readers.
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somehow the narrative jumps, sometimes it is not immediately clear where the reality is, and where the fantasies are, what the hell is going on and why. Well, the third part goes, but there was practically no real sex at all, very little for a porn story. And if sex is not the main thing here, but the main thing is history, then sexitails are clearly not the place to publish this story.
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Well, take into account, you need more sex
But here is just the main thing not to bend so that GG fucked everyone. I try to follow a certain logic of the characters, and as can be seen from the text, prostitutes who are ready to have sex for no reason are few here.
At the expense of the skipping story - I agree from the side, as sometimes one page was created several days under different moods. But the plot is so conceived. GG faced a large incomprehensible force with which he is unable to cope.
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By the way, I thought a little, but did not understand.
Your “unit” in the assessment is due to the fact that you didn’t like the third part at all? that is, the plot is terrible, the text is too much, the sex is not enough, the hero is not interesting, there are many mistakes, and in general everything is not right?
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The work itself is like.
I do not like the fact that the author does not know how to single out the dialogues, the conversations of the characters ...
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I agree, the design of the dialogues is very annoying.
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Accepted.
I will highlight the dialogues as is customary, each phrase in a new line.
True to my total 160 pages, in this case, you can add immediately from 40 pages.
But, if you follow the established practice, where each part has an average of 50 pages, with new dialogues, I will be able to create a smaller amount of text, with the same volume. Kidding)
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Like the last part I liked it very much!) One minus, dreams, memories, and other glitches)) Already very much churn the story. No, I also liked them, but the fact that they started suddenly under an hour, and without preparation they confused me greatly. Perhaps it is better to enclose them in quotes, or edit them already when they are published on the site, for example, add a slope to the font. Thereby highlighting these points from the total mass, and making it easier to read.
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I agree
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I will consider
The idea of a consistent narrative, when real events flow into a dream or fantasy, was deliberate, because I wanted to introduce some kind of surprise in the text. Maybe I overdid it.
For the future, I will try to somehow highlight (distinguish) textual fantasies / dreams / the like. But in this case, it will be more difficult to turn the planned plot problems of the GG, since it will immediately be clear to readers what is reality and what is fiction.
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It is not necessary to select everything, the plots are different, but for example dreams, it is most likely desirable to highlight. As such, they are not part of the narrative itself, and in my opinion, they only deepen the story, and do not move it further. Plus, they are quite voluminous in content, and as far as I have noticed, they are more likely to be more meaningful than others)) And so it will be easier for those who are looking for exactly the plot part, as well as for those who are looking for exactly that kind of drama.
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Oh yes! Thoughts and dialogues with the Jinn, also seems to me) So it will probably be more interesting and more practical. Especially if you switch to traditional dialogues. That is, thoughts and internal dialogues, it will be possible to combine with ordinary communication, and without confusing what and where)
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The thought caught. I will try to apply it in the following parts.
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All is well, but proofreading is still necessary, and then bunches instead of hands knock down the pace of the story.
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Wonderful, I read with pleasure.
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A good story, fascinating, I hope the author will be able to finish and correctly complete, and not like the rest of the long-term construction site.
P. S Author, you are not accidentally inspired by the story "Alan" for the authorship of xipoza?
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The author, if HS plans to seduce Liza in the end, then I think it makes sense to devote more time to her too, While I have all the episodes with Liza associated with something like “but here I have a rubber woman and I sooner or later fuck
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The story is interesting. Liked almost everything. I agree with the previous comments on the dialogues and dreams. From the wishes I would like to see the development of gg and his abilities a little wider than now. Here you can consider and treatment and an increase in the volume of the same breast, well, or rejuvenation of the mother gg and other age characters. And so for 3 parts Gg only grew a member and adjusted his eyesight Yulia. I think there is room to grow
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We are waiting for my sister, gently, strongly, and efficiently. Not short.
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Development will be. GG himself has just started to guess about all his abilities. In the future, he will need only some outside help in order to master his full potential, but for now, he has some limiting factors.
In general, I plan to disclose more the identity of GG. Show his development and his point of view on everything that happens. He has fetishes, and he tries to stick with them.
At the expense of Lisa, just to remind you that the GG has chosen a peculiar way of revenge, namely, the suggestion of thought, about the regular desire of the farm, his brother. To observe how desire and aggression fight in it. HG as it forces her to search for a way of satisfaction on her own, and not as with her mother, where he sent her on the right track.
But do not worry, I will take into account that many were waiting for events with Liha.
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All you are doing right, estimates confirm this. For fans of "fast and in all the cracks" there are a lot of other authors.
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Oh, again, these mamkasstrastyaetyoby cleared. Let's have a normal story about crap tanks.
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Normal text, super. Incest does not walk, but the protagonist “sometimes gets it with difficulty”. Jumps from sleep to reality are also interesting. I read as if I were watching a movie. There is a plot, but not a stupid bang, you don’t need to add more sex; And a huge request to read the text. Errors that spelling, that grammatical, and sometimes because of the autocorrect - darkness. Although, I must say, after the “Wish Stone”, this is the first story that is really interesting to read and you don’t even pay attention to mistakes.
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Thank you very much for your understanding. I try to follow pseudo-realism, and therefore, in the actions of each character should be logic, motivation and adequate consequences.
About the error is not once reported, and I continue to sprinkle ashes on my head. When I encounter mistakes in the text, I immediately correct it. But when, it works like "autochange" and it does not stand out as an error, it is extremely difficult for me to notice it. Usually, I just don’t see any errors in the text, because as I reread, I see what’s supposed to be there, and not what it really is.
But I will take into account the comments and try to be more attentive.
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Great storytelling. I would like more dialogues with the genie, but it seems that it is almost not needed.
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+++++10+++++
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The text is just fire. For a long time in the subject of "incest" at least something like not seen. I remember the most fantasy about a guy who also mastered magical things. He was still cast in the Middle Ages. I don’t remember the name. It has long been.
And so. All essentially. Edit, they need a lot. I perfectly understand that it is difficult to do them. It seems that both you read, and you rule, but no, no, yes, something arrives. But at practice.
I would also add that I wish that the dreams were not just for the sake of sex and the depth of fantasy sabzh, but also somehow revealed the story. For example, that gin somehow tries to manipulate the consciousness of yy with their help.
For sure. Gin. Make it a little more substantial than Morgan Freeman. He does not feel like a character in the events, but as a simple NPC that teaches you which arrows you need to press in order to walk. But if he thought so, then the claim is removed.
And yes, the dialogues are not really very obvious.
One hell, the text is magic and I will definitely wait for the next part.
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Thanks for the positive feedback.
There are some dreams that carry meaning, but there is also just for fantasy. In the future, the plot will reveal and what is what. Yes, and Jean is also not so simple, he has his own motives and goals. In the future, the plot will explain why he has changed in behavior.
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Thanks for the part. About the allocation of dreams and dialogues with gin already said. I am glad that at least somewhere there is a narration with logic, since quite often the others have “everything at the click of their fingers” turns out. Good luck in writing. P. s if possible, it will be cool to periodically talk about the state of writing parts in the comments.
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products would be) otherwise everyone was waiting ...
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So far, all the chapters are excellent. The main thing in the pursuit of the plot is not lost the sexual development of GG. Many stories laid out here begin interestingly and then turn into stories for children. The plot of the adventure and not any porn.
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https://www.syl.ru/article/188746/new_oformlenie-pryamoy-rechi-osnovnyie-pravila
Author! Well, it is not possible for us, the readers, to disassemble where the phrase one character begins, and where the other begins. Follow the link, learn to draw up the text and you will earn more approval from readers.
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when to wait for the product?
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But I want from fantasy fantasy less fantasy character, but it turns out not reality is not real and the emotion is too deep with a more subtle sense of not consciousness and realism ...))
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Sale, need to sell !!!
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Good day, dear readers.
I suppose that at the moment you are all interested in "when will the sequel come out?".
I do not want to upset you, but the continuation will not be very soon. If anyone is interested, as I wrote earlier, my job has changed, and as it is obvious, there was very little free time for writing the text.
At the moment I continue to write 4. part, but very slowly. So slowly that it saddens me very much. But such is life.
I want to continue this in April, maybe by the end of the month. That is my plan, but I don’t imagine how everything goes.
Also, difficulties with inspiration, again, because of the new work, the head is occupied by another, but I hold and motivate at least the fact that the fourth part will be the most significant in the plot of the whole story.
That's all for now.
Thank you all for your support and HUGE thanks for the wait.
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Looking forward to continue as the Avengers final
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And can make the main character bad with time? Over time, he was able to develop the ability to subjugate and break the will of other characters and rape them.
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Violence is better not necessary, much more interesting by doubtful agreement
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I’m not going to use harsh violence, but I really hope that the plot twists I have planned will please all readers.
Well, with regards to continuing ... I can only try to encourage, in spite of all the difficulties, I do not give up and try, whenever I have an opportunity, to click on the clave at least a couple of lines.
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Can lay out at least what is? And then complement perezalivaya? Very interesting
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