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Queen of my soul! I did not look at the whole performance at the stage, but looked at you. My young blood is boiling, and my head is spinning only on your smell and deep, penetrating look. Do not deny the young man a cup of coffee - at this moment I enthusiastic and wandering eyes, looked at it all.
She smiled and said:
- Well ... young man, call me the day after tomorrow, - and gave her phone number.
... After several romantic encounters, we sat in the evening cafe. There was a long pause in the conversation and I said:
- Vera, I apologize for being straightforward, but ... I am mad at you. Just some kind of madness ...
“I guess,” she said calmly, calmly.
After a short pause, I quietly uttered:
- Let's go?
Vera changed her face, became very serious, her eyes were restless. Seconds went on for a long time. I became nervous. It took about ten minutes before she leaned over the table to me, and barely audibly answered:
- Do you have it?
With a heavy cock, I silently got up, walked over to her and handed over my coat. Then we got out, got into the car and, without saying a word, accompanied by the calm melodies of the Hermitage radio, we drove to my house.
She was very shy and behaved a bit differently than usual. I went back and forth and asked a lot of unrelated questions. I carelessly supported the conversation, as if not noticing her nervousness. He offered a martini and politely showed where the bathroom is. She retired. I prepared my huge bed, which has already been visited by many mature and elderly women. For myself, I call it: sex arena. In the bedroom I have two wardrobes with books specially selected for sport. There is about martial arts and bodybuilding, fitness, etc. Firstly, women like it (even mature ones); and secondly, they have a completely clear practical purpose - the books muffle the sound when the aunts shout.
Vera came out wrapped in a large towel. I suggested she lie down while taking a shower. She lay down and asked to turn off the lights. When I returned, I immediately dove under the covers. Faith excites me with its obedience. She was clearly not one of those who would take the initiative, but would obediently do what she was told. We lay down a bit. Then I took her hand and put my big cock in her. She squeezed his fingers a little, then jerked off. Slightly spread her legs and the second hand began to caress her cunt. I threw off the blanket and sat down in front of her legs. The light from street lamps clearly detected her body and posture. Big breasts quickly heaved and fell with frequent breathing. She was clearly worried. To add pepper to the not so touching moment, I asked:
- Vera, I understand that women who have taken place love to make beautiful love, savoring every moment and enjoying long tender kisses in strong arms ... But let me be myself, allowing me some pranks? You just blow me a dick!
Vera unfriendly looked at me and her legs slowly began to move back. Ha! We have already passed this many times. Oh, how many little bodies I had broken like this ... I licked my thumb and plunged it (to my great surprise) into a very hairy cunt, began to massage the elastic clit. Vera froze. Oh yeah! The pussy of this mother was big! Things that I like! Fingers tangled in wet thick hair. I went a little deeper and her fucker noticeably wet. The room smelled of sex, or rather, a big fuck! Faith - began to want to fuck! I did not stand on ceremony, I took her by the hips and planted on a fat dick ...
- And m-can I give you a little bit of it ... as a d-girl? - I asked, knocking the breath, making at this moment deep frictions. Vera nodded hesitantly.
I turned her to the side. He threw one leg over his shoulder, grabbed his hair with his left hand and pulled, tilting her head strongly. Vera arched like a bow, her chest bulging vulgarly.With my right hand, I firmly squeezed her "melon". Now I conveniently kept this bitch to tear her pussy! The leg on my shoulder, spring, allowed me to dynamically fuck her body. Powerful shocks I raped 56-year-old brunette. After ten minutes, she was already completely choked and a hoarse voice, as if a demon escaped from imprisonment, began to moan out of her chest with moans. Another moment and Vera - sexy and went yelled! Dick hard! I really wanted this attractive nurse back then - in the theater! And now - it is on my cock, in my hands.
I boiled all over. While piling on her, I bent her leg badly, from which her cunt, at such an angle, almost crawled onto the dick herself. Pulling her hair and bending it even harder, I opened my right hand and her melons swayed. Elastic tits of this old lady I completely demolished the tower and I forcefully snapped at them with his palm. Soft flesh burned my hand. From surprise, Vera shrieked, but that did not stop me. I succumbed from below again. The melon darted sharply, almost touching the nipple of her chin and again curled up into an elastic large ball. The palm was burning. The third slap! At this time, at an angle. Breast stretched out again by inertia and swaying gathered again. Every time Vera screamed, choking in groans. Yes! A woman of fifty is not a student who does not understand anything about sex! She would have thrown a tantrum that they would kill her and call for help from her neighbors. And this one - enduringly and patiently, gave me pleasure. I spanked on her elastic breasts, to numb my hands. Then he released her stiff leg and put Vera in front of him on his back. Lickedly spreading his legs to the side, I planted it with a champ. The hair on her pussy was knocked together in obmusoleenie with curly icicles, and the swollen lips of the pussy lips broke apart.
- And now I will sail you! - I warned her, clinging like a crab in tits. In fact, pulling her chest, I passionately steepled Vera. Hard breasts rested in the palm of your hand.
- Eh, Verka! If only you had stayed with me ... Wow and I would have “fried you” every day! Good - I said, hard dryucha her. - I have not had such a woman for a long time! - I continued to admire. - Come on, wrap your legs around my neck! - I took her ass from the bottom and slightly raised. - Come on, let's make a narrow one!
Vera, obediently put her legs on my shoulders and joined my feet behind my neck. Cunt compressed dick, and I became majestically good. I podrobanil her a little in this position.
- Come on, have more! - I wished, having uncoupled our legs and, having crossed them, having shamelessly having lifted upwards. Big cunt stretched into a flat, narrow, long slit. - Yes-ah-ah! I will teach you to fuck! - I triumphed. Holding his legs in an upright position and holding a member, with force pushed into a wet crack. I learned these tricks from the banal Kama Sutra (a useful book).
- With such a pussy, you can achieve a lot! - broke out from me and I stopped. But in my head continued streams of thoughts and options. I wanted Vera even during sex. Excitement - generated more excitement. I wanted to keep her and stare at her every day. It's akin to what you saw the woman of your dreams, you drooled, and on the dick could hang a bucket and it would not fall! And suddenly, the bones of fate lay down so that this woman gave you! The very first thought that would shoot your brain is “I want it all the time.” So I - wanted to fuck Faith every day.
She held her legs tightly tight, the crack was so narrow that I had already begun to feel the sensation of the completion of this marathon. In order to prolong the pleasure, I spread my legs to the side, still holding them upright. At that moment, Vera cried out loudly. Her body shook in the convulsions of a cosmic orgasm and began to squirm. I realized that the moment had come when I could still have time to quickly pound her sweet hole. Strong points, I drove the dick into a tormented, big pussy.
- Yes, Verka! With such a pussy ... - I praised her.
I did not have to wait long and a stormy orgasm swept over me. Pulling out a member, I snipers began to cover her streams of hot sperm. Sprayed and drenched with seed - Vera retired to the shower.
She stayed with me for the night. I do not cease to be surprised, seeing adult women who are not familiar to me sleeping next to me. Her sleep was even and carefree.
The next day, and it was Sunday, she did not go anywhere. I gave her a new (previously specially stored) short, translucent, with a large neckline robe. She was clearly embarrassed last night: with a flushed face, Vera talked about anything, but not about sex. She was without a bodice and all day I admired her big melons, peeking through matter. I deliberately stared at her. She was uncomfortable, but at the same time liked my attention very much, since she didn’t particularly close - her protruding breasts went. During the day, in the silent moments of her reverie, I saw her nipples stick out. She apparently drove the topic of yesterday's sex and was excited by her own thoughts.
Towards evening, when she sat silently again, her nipples gave her away and I said:
- Ver, let's live with me another week? It's strange, but I have a feeling of ... falling in love!
She raised her big eyes at me. For a minute or two, she did not say anything, but by the expression of her eyes it was clear that she was torn. Several times she wanted to say something, but did not dare. I, in order not to put pressure on her, said that now I would make a delicious dessert. When everything was ready and a biscuit with a whipped cream was put on the table. She said:
- You're good. Highly. But I can not. I need to go.
I did not insist. She got dressed. She kissed me on the cheek and left.
Three days later I wrote a text message: “I want you very much!” In response, silence. The next day I wrote again: “Come, I really want you!” Again silence. After a couple of days I called. The tube was removed, but it was quiet.
“Vera, I dream of you ...” I said. But she hung up the phone.
I scored.
A week ago, she called.
- I still dream about you? - asked a sexy female voice.
- I want you wildly! - I answered firmly.
“Prepare your dessert,” answered the same voice.
Three hours later the doorbell rang. In the aisle stood a gorgeous woman in a short bonded dress, luxurious flowing black hair — it was Vera!
“May I ask you something?” - She asked me still standing in the doorway.
- Yes of course! - I was taken aback.
- And can you ... how then ... like a girl? - she said timidly and blushing, entered.
Now Vera lives in my home. And every night she takes off her panties and gives herself a sailor, in her already shaved big pussy, allowing me various liberties ...
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Exciting! Let's!
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Oh, master! Again threw winding story! Crunchy!
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Sumptuously!!
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I read, now I want to fuck ...
Tundra, you write well!
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I also read and want it. Anyone would have pulled on his lieutenant!
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So what's the deal Amigo?
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Returned master wrap voices and comments)))
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Guest agree, it should be easy to wrap everything on such horns))) Even the horns themselves look like you screwed yourself)))
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This is one of the normal authors who writes stories, at least similar to the truth.
And not a fairy tale or invention, on which even the time you do not want to spend ...
Afftor, do not listen to the envious, write more !!!
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Not Tundrik well done. It seems that everyone is pressing on the same pedal, but the descriptions are lively and quite diverse each time. Hey, Tundrik, and you do not want to marry, there, have children? So what. Find yourself a pullet of about forty-two so ... And how tired, you will light up with her mother)))
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And what? Explanatory sentence!
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Come on.I immediately, after this, re-read "Aunt" with comments. And I understood ... It's not funny anymore, I'm sorry, Tundra. Itself so.
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And when the mother gets bored - you respect her grandmother, and so on.
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)))))
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“A hoarse voice, which saved out of the shrinking of the dyes, began to wrest from her breasts” - this is especially beautiful) was pleased. But I’m not sure that strong words - ladies in their 50s - are normally perceived ... and do not distort their ears)
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Oh, friends! Glad to hear you!
How many reviews! Very nice.
Thank you for your humor! Really laugh)))
Sorry for the late answer: I was a little distracted, so to speak))))
Yes, Chelovechinka, I agree - it is necessary to get married once, but my favorite pullet is 42-year-old beauty (Kate Beckinsale) - far away ((((And therefore, Tundra, wanders through the expanses of the female soul, in search of happiness! And shares some of her adventures - with you.
Strong words, TAIS, during orgasm - women do not even hear, so you can say anything)))) And sometimes, just such a word explains the whole nature of animal desire. Of course, I filter it and not everyone, but sometimes I allow it)))
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Again aroused! But when slapping on melons, I think it is unbearable pain? And you just have to marry! Imagine - at your wedding all your fans, women and all congratulate you from the heart and without jealousy !!!
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Hi, Baha! Thank!)))
Well, I do not beat, it is rather such pushes with a delay. As a slap in the face for a light reddening - for perk. According to the pope too: you can slap, but you can hit. Of course, I'm not beating anyone)))
Imagine what would have been at the wedding))))) probably for a member would be dragged off ...)))))))
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Hi, Tundra! For a member of you at your wedding can not be dragged - you have a wedding night ahead! And all the guests, after your departure to their box, organized a swing party !!!
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Baha! Five points!
I think you are an awesome person, with super humor and a positive outlook on life, which is fascinating for its ease and for whom women are hung up with unrestrained cries)))))
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Thank you, Tundra! Everything you say is the same, except for women, they abstain — I think because I'm family!
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So you do not tell it to everyone!
I imagine the women are running in a crowd, and you immediately go: “Stand babonki! I am family! ”)))))
So of course ...
But this is a joke.
Family is great!
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Tundra-I love everything by garlic and mutual agreement! Marina writes you (54 years old) show her a class if she is your type? Do not let us-your fans !!!
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somewhere I have already read this)) theater, monocle and tundra. smenka was also?))) glad to hear you !!
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Hello to U too!
Well, I "hunt" on the famous paths))))) in the theater. Smarter not invented. Not at the station, there are only bomzhihi ...
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fufufu))) this Roxy can write about homeless people)))
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No, I'm better than elegant ladies who are attached to art))))
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Tundra, read your stories and I want to fuck with you!
And then tell everyone: are you as good as you write?
Maybe your "spine" is not so elastic? Maybe all this is bullshit?
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Hello, Marina! I hope if everything will be like in the story and even better, I hope you will accomplish your goal together?
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Just wondering. Write all the whales, but is it really so ...
So many stories and all of these are directly refined ...
I want to dare)))
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I myself like this, I really like to check. There were cases of an intimate nature, and when they got to the point, they didn’t take the phone or drink it yesterday, and so on ... I’d like to marry Marina with you, by mutual consent and bring it to unforgettable orgasms! It is a pity the distance is decent and no offense, if something is not so expressed.
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That's always the case: a woman must wait ...
You write here, and Tundra has fun there with some Vera.
Baha, I'm not mad. I love to do it myself with good fellows.
I'm not a whore, and never had anything to do with it, just when I see a young ...
I had one such - a stallion, had sex for three years, but then ran away like a cowardly animal ... Ordinary thing.
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Marina - I don’t consider you a whore! I just love women who understand sex and enjoy, and you and I have an age difference not big, but in my heart I feel young! Maybe somehow I will look into your region or you in our, on Issyk-Kul lake, will be your personal guide and not only !!!
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Unfortunately, Baha, I love young)))
But still nice, thanks!
If anything, I'm from Peter.
Yes, waiting is a tedious thing ...
Tundra! Much is missing!
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I'd like to visit St. Petersburg! May God give us a date?
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Oh, pardons. There have already been a whole debate)))
Marina, hello!
Do not worry about my “root”))))), I’m worried about your front end))), is it so strong?)))
But seriously, it seems to me that some bearded man - wanted to hunt for the Tundra)))
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Finally, the Tundra appeared.
Well, what about a bearded man - you bent it ...
So what do you say? How to find you?
Well, if a woman herself asks for x * d, then stupid to refuse?
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Well...
Tundra is not stupid)))
Maybe you, Marina, write to me in PM?
Chat, ask questions and answer them? BUT?
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Not. So not interesting. I promised everyone that I would tell you how good you are. Do not you persecute?
As you saw from the messages - I am also St. Petersburg. And I can go to the theater (when and to what - I will say), and there you will find me.
A short dress, mesh stockings, high heels, make-up, manicure / pedicure and without a bra - this I will provide! Everything as you like! You'll like it! You do not risk anything, if you don’t like it - you just don’t come and that’s all ...
But I think you will lick at me and want to see me in action))))))
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Clever)))
The bearded man will put his chick in stockings and a short dress, I'll go to her, and he will come to me)))
Ok, let's play this game))) I love intrigue.
I'll write more.
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What did you do, “bearded man, yes bearded man” !!!
Baba wants sex!
He himself wrote: “I pulled her legs up and so and so! Then he bent, threw, bent! Yes, so more depraved! I stuck it out! ”
Anyone will probably want to read this, just not anyone dares to write about the meeting!
Come on, don't annoy already!
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Okay, okay, calmer!
Stockings-mesh, without a bodice, and even without panties ... tempting to write ...
And do not forget to shave “there” then)))) (sorry for my French).
I'll let you know...)))
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Good.
Again, a woman must wait (((
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Marina-let the expectations come true perfectly!
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Come on-Tundra not Tomi light it up !!!
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Well, Bach)))) I feel I’m stuck in history on my ass)))
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Do not pontayus-Tundra! There is nothing to run into you))) everything will be tiptop !!! The most important thing is to prove to everyone that you are a man, and not a virtual!
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Pancake.
OK. I will risk!))))
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The bearded man probably bares his horns. And who so communicates with women ... pussy to shave advised her how to put on her last whore, bu-ga-ga-ga! I would also suggest writing on her forehead that she is a dirty mother for fucking. Baba would send you for sure, this is a bearded man, a thug from a big road luring you into his trap. Believe it he korarirovat, break off the horns and shove in the ass. If you are not fucked or whatever your moron is right for you, then take a knife with you, it will definitely come in handy. And even better to meet a man 10 with him grab, and then suddenly there you are a crowd of bearded men waiting.
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And if there is a beauty girl who wants sex?
And I will refuse now?
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Marina, do you have a few words about yourself)))
Since you want everyone to know, write here.
Height, weight, what kind of breasts (I hope they are elastic?), Ass, legs, hair, hairstyle, eye color, can it be flexible, can you add something else from yourself)))
We are all curious to know, anyway, somehow I must know you in the theater)))
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182 cm tall, athletic physique, stern face, long brown hair, breasts - as you like, like your mother’s))) big and with brown nipples! You will appreciate! Oh yeah, they are resilient!
In the past, I conducted physical education at school (for girls), because you will like your ass and legs too!
I am very active in sex, I will not need to beg)))
You can say - was married. This ungrateful decrepit animal, somewhere running, already 10 years. So - I consider myself free.
As you understand, I am 54. It seems everything. What's next?
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Hello Marina!
It's very simple: I will choose the theater and buy tickets for the next Saturday (the 23rd).
I'll write more.
Just say straight: fuck you)))))
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Agree.
Just write under this story to know where to look.
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Straight is not one flaw in it, and many marcin? and all the teeth? plugin eat? and skin is flabby and how is it with cellulite?
The beauties of sex always have enough, they usually do not want sex, but another. Marina, please persuade this writer to go to a meeting, take a good whip with you and whip up, like his mother, for climbing up to adult women under her skirt. Although it would be better if you suddenly come back "this ungrateful animal that runs somewhere" and will help you raise a child. So to speak, carry out explanatory work with your new son. So he and the new story based on real events will be.
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The man put forward conditions where to fuck)))) Better fuck in the theater)))
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I go nuts !!! I will not point the finger - but who is envious or do not know for what reasons? Want to ruin everything? But you are Tundra + Marina = arrange for everyone to evil, not forgotten fly away, in all its manifestations! We are waiting with excitement and impatience, that you are both real and knowledgeable in sex, in all its manifestations !!!
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Hello! Everything will be fine if it is not someone's joke.
But I was still going to go to the theater, one more ticket, one less will not spoil the situation.
If no one comes, just look for someone in working mode))))
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Hello! Everything will be fine! I'm sure Marina excited and started your story and she really wants to make sure! And if you do not grow together, but it is unlikely, you have nothing to lose. In your area of these women in your age enough! Do not lose your spirit-forward for new pleasures !!!
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Especially from envy))) And if they break his head? You would go along with him and check that everything was smooth. That is to say he would be a hedge.
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"If no one comes, just look for
somebody in the working mode ”- the main thing is that the bearded perverts do not find you yourself.
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Yes, and do not sci about this, it's Chelovechina making fun.
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One gets a strong feeling that the author is talking to himself here))))
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Yeah, and this message also wrote to myself))))
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My dear fan, Marina!
Solemnly inform:
23rd in Music Hall (m. Gorkovskaya)
Beginning at 19-30
show ballet "French Kiss"
We meet at the first wardrobe on the way.
I will be glad to see you)))
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Tundra, I am very happy!
You will not regret!
I would be as promised: in stockings in a net, cherry short dress, red open shoes, with a great mood and even with a little surprise)))
Well, see you)))
Smack; - *
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Hooray! I'm happy for you both! Looking forward to meeting details? Hopefully, Marina will reveal a surprise with time? Good luck !!!
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Hi, Baha!
Let's see what happens)))
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OK!
"Little surprise" is interesting)))
I look forward to))) see you!
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Tundra, hello! I hope everything goes with you! Hopefully, Tundra + Marina = a honeymoon vacation at the Issyk-Kul lake, will I be a personal guide?
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Thanks for the invitation, Bach!
Interestingly, for Marina such)) honeymoon))
If this is not a joke, then there will probably be something to write about ...
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I hope Marina with her head is friends and will answer beautifully! For the first time, on this site, such intrigue and hope for a positive effect !!!
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There is something in it.
Maybe something will burn out)))
I promise, if it really happens, then I'll sign for it, I will not be lazy, in all colors))))
I think Marina will not mind, like she wanted to tell everyone.
Damn, I'm already all in anticipation, even a member of “polished”)))))
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Yes, I imagine your condition! The most important thing is that the wait does not disappoint)))
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You are right - exciting)))
I have only once been in my life, I met him blindly. This is the second.
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The long-awaited day has come! Tundra good morning! If possible, after meeting with Marina, write a few words? Good luck!!!
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“Uraaa! I'm happy for you both! Waiting with
looking forward to meeting details?
I hope Marina surprise with
time to open? "- For both?))) Well, maybe this is a prophetic typo, because there is probably a surprise between the legs dangling.
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Don't worry, Tundra-Colis!
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Bach, hello!
Sorry, I'm in a hurry now (I'm at home).
It is necessary to leave.
I met Marina, but there was nothing ((((I asked to call for her today).
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I am very happy! Is she your type? Hi, Marina from me is exciting, sexy and big !!! I will wait with white envy and do not look forward to it !!!
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Hi, Tundra! Probably sweet Marina, you can not enjoy?
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Hello, Baha !! Thank.
You're right, good ...
All OK.
Now frantically writing a story, until all the sensations are sharp and sweet))))
On Wednesday, I think I'll post it.
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I am very happy for both of you! SuperPuper-probably burst with envy? In the summer with Marina come to visit. I look forward to the story !!!
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Why should he burst? From someone here fantasies?))))))
baha, you are either a very naive person or your fake komenty (written by the author), like half of the komentov in this topic;)
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Hmm, I'm really naive! But sex in all its manifestations, within reason I adore!
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Bach, it’s good that at least you know that you are not me, but I am not you)))))))))
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Tundra, I agree with you, the taste and color, no friend! Come on, light up so your women have their eyes burning !!!
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Naive is you, Hmm))))))
If you think that I am really sitting and spending time on creating large-scale correspondence with myself))))))))
I calf chpoku at this time and looking for new))))))
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Tundra catch two tens! And for the story and for kamenty. They are no less interesting than the story. And although some suspect the well-known author of ST, read and revered by the motley public, in cloning and cheating both balls and kament, I JURA Stanislavsky DO NOT BELIEVE!
I believe in something else that was written by guests-fans of his work. And that Marina is a real character and soon we will read the story about the meeting in the theater.
Tundra is one of the few authors who deftly balances on the highly artistic narrative and its jerkiness. However, it is interesting to read and excitedly written. To all the other charms, he chose a rather non-standard topic. Call it a perversion of the type of gerontophilia, the language does not turn. He spud elderly ladies. However, quite selective in their preferences. He needs ladies in juice and also not easily falling backwards and spreading legs at once. And smart, beautiful, loving. Those who wish and are able to receive and give joy from love.
He needs a slow-moving siege of the fortress. And even when the fortress has already settled, it still builds itself from the tselochka, shy and not so. And even after all that was, he waits a whole week waiting for him to be in love.)))
And psychologism in the descriptions? From what, how? This is also not given to everyone. Well, almost weaving kamentov under the story is only a confirmation of my words.
In short, I am waiting for the story under the working title: “A Date with Marina in the Theater”)))
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Thank you very much, Yura, for a sincere, beautiful and capacious review. Many people reproach me in the so-called "cheating" points, but if they had thought HEAD at least a little, this question would have disappeared by itself:
The number of views of stories, on average from 20,000 to 60,000 times! There are estimates from 150 to 300, i.e., if you take their logic, then it turns out I went to my own story tens of thousands of times !!, and then I came to work (i.e. it is probably quite obvious that I have 150 or so more than 300 computers - no !!!) and at work I asked everyone to put me in a top ten, having completely lighted up before ALL the staff of the enterprise - their deeds and personal life, in their own person? Yes, even doing it every time? ... Then I think - everything is so clear!
Regarding the truthfulness or falsehood, the proposed stories, it is already for everyone to judge. I do not set goals to impose or prove the reality of what is happening.
The purpose of my work is to show some moments of my intimate life (with artistic processing), so to speak, taken from practice; to bring "-" and "+" of what can be good and bad, and of course - EXATTING !!!)))))
Uh, thanks again for the comment.
I am certainly a fan of your stories, as vivid, jerking and funny stories.)))))
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Tundra is because I judge by myself. In my autobiographical stories, I write only the truth, well, of course a bit embellishing, changing the entourage of the place, age and of course the names, except my own)))
The same with non-autobiographical. I still describe my feelings and actions or act as if in one situation or another.
And it seems to me that all interesting authors do this. And the fact that they fantasize from their heads, not supported by their own experience, very few read. Because people there are not alive, members of fantastic size and they fuck as much as sex giants in porn movies.
And you look true. she didn’t come after all for tomorrow, but waited a week and didn’t give up right on the chairs in the theater, buffet or to the toilet))
She gave up, but not immediately. That's what salt and pepper truthful stories, the truth of life, and not fiction and dreaming. Because so many kamenty, ratings and views))))
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Yes, I am also about this. I am not interested in writing about what I did not do and do not know.
That is why I do not have anal scenes. Well, I did not do anyone in the ass)))
How can I describe this? Of course, you can tear up fragments of stories from other authors, but this is on the conscience of everyone who writes. I, above all, primarily emphasize my thoughts and feelings, since I really want to share this with the electorate.
For me (as well as for you) the emotional component, heat is important. And the process of sex is the same everywhere “inserted - pulled out”, but the atmosphere in which all this happens, like a woman, embarrassed - is given away! That is what excites. And, it excites me twice:
In the first time when this happens, and in the second when I describe these events and again I remember everything in detail, I worry.
After having sex with an unfamiliar woman, a mental connection with her is formed, everything becomes different. People, like, went to a territory unfamiliar to them - the territory of intima, sex.
Even the fact that a stranger adult woman - undressed, it already blows the head. And if something more allowed ...
In general, I am really looking forward to your stories !!! Very nice to exchange views with you!
Thank)))))
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All this is clear and close to me, Tundra. Now, if I have not had sex with older people, I don’t write about it and vice versa just as I write something that I either know thoroughly or have experienced.
Of course, everything is the way you explain it, so in your stories there are no standard PT phrases about penis size and cases in unusual situations and places. You may have failed, but the path to this “failed” is interesting and exciting to read. This is for you !!!)))
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You are a fool, do not turn on hundreds of computers at home)))) Change IP, proxy, VPN, services for tasks and so on. A million ways to do this very quickly and effortlessly (with minimal knowledge). I'm not saying that this is exactly what you are doing, you just don’t have to build yourself a blonde))) It's great if the assessments are real, it’s just hard to believe in their reality when you’ve been watching popular stories on the resource for several years already. Descending ratings for works that have left the first page of the site ALWAYS drops rapidly and gradually come to naught, but no, it is in your stories that it beats all conceivable records for a long time. And even in unpopular categories like Elderly. I would like to believe in their honesty, but it is difficult;)) Especially funny is the message that you don’t have time for this, because you are teasing the calves, as you put it, but writing stories so that someone jerks off to they leave hundreds of comments and the time is;)) I will be glad to make a mistake) Beaver to you))
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Dear, Hmm.
If you are an expert in IT-technologies, then post your story and try to take first place on the site ... I love not words, but actions. The guy said - the guy did!
Mythical jumping on buildings (cities) is cool, but I'm not Carlson, who lives in the basement)))
To write a story - it is not necessary for this week, I write them in 1, 5 ... 2 hours, it is easy when there are events in my head that just need to be transferred "on paper." But to find these 2 hours ... Yes, this is a problem for me. The% of my answers in the comments is small, and believe me, it does not take 40 minutes. Just went, read and answered. I do not think over the proposals for an hour.
About believing or not believing, it decides for itself ...
I wish you good luck too))))
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Hmm, if you under my story wrote about these ah pi proxy and vepeen, I would understand. I am a computer man and I understand from where and where electric current flows.
Reading the stories of any author, you can immediately understand the humanities he or a techie. In my one, there are no trips theater, if there is, then for the entourage. But in mine one can read the device of a specialized workshop or a method of how to repair something. For Tundra, I am sure, all these words are gibberish.
And for me, no. But I know for sure that it’s difficult to wind up the CT counter up to 50,000 views, but already to put a hundred scores on myself and put up so many keys, you need to be completely squeezed, just entering a captcha will get it. A guest wrote to me under one story that he entered 5 times)))
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2510yura, and indeed it is true ... I did not think about the humanities of a person))) Maybe he really doesn’t understand anything about it (judging by the answers)) And about assessments and captcha ... So you don’t have to do it yourself. For pennies on assignment sites (I will not advertise) you will be given at least a thousand comments and ratings per day. Only the meaning?)) I propose to stop this meaningless discussion on this)
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And there is))))
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Damn, guys. Actually, I am a mechanical engineer)))))) this is honest. For me, it is even openly written in the “about me” section when I registered on the site. The engineers are all different, as are the doctors.
But I have a second education (economic).
In computers I am not strong (if not to take my knowledge of Autocad, SolidWorks, NX and a number of drawing complexes), but I’m not going to get into my pocket for a word.
And the discussion is really meaningless. I have nothing against and on the account of fictional stories, but only on the condition that they are written "tasty", and not in the way many people write: 10 sentences, and then - consisting only of the words x * d and pi * yes.
In general, I am a “humanities engineer” with the inclinations of gerontophilia and light notes of incest)))) it turns out like this ...
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Tundra, hello! Why would anyone not have something to prove, you have great stories! Where is the story today is Thursday? And Marina caught silence?
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It gets better! Thank! So, something was written off by several comments ...
I spread the story.
With Marina, we both departed and all. Probably busy.
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Don't forget about the surprise from Marina?
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Yes, everything is there)))
The text in the morning for moderation)))
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I forgot about this topic for a long time, I remembered only when I saw a new horned story. It turns out that you are still alive ... By the way, I put about 20 ratings in about an hour and a half approximately and this is not wise, but simply with the help of ordinary anonymizers, which are a lot on the Internet, and if it is more difficult to take ways, you can make a huge wrap a short time, the main thing is to delete cookies and put as many ratings as you want. Change ip - elementary. Comments, so they can be written by one person for only 30 pieces in an hour. And by the way, comments, and more correct to say feedback about the story, this is not a correspondence about life consisting of 80 messages from two or three people. (Such communication is not a review, it is called a word with the letter F, this is for 25).
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I'm glad for you.So you can write a joke what and bring it to the first place)))))
I "fart" just do not need it! Write and do. Then we'll see.
But I am sure that your writing on the next day will roll in the basket, with a rating of 1 ... 2
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Do not ... ep my comments to delete.
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Cool! Read with pleasure!
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flat and with repetitions, you lose shape
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Fuck up
The main thing - every time there is a “picture” when reading!
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