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said again, sex drove everything out of my head. "Love is not for me, I can only fuck." Yes, it is. For all 5 years of our connection, Uncle Vanya did not say “I love you” to me, only “I want”, only “I wish”. For him, I'm just a girl who can spread her legs wide. “I will never divorce,” “children are not with me,” “you may have other lovers.” Yes! I met with others. First out of curiosity. Then she wanted someone to push Uncle Vanya out of my heart and my body. Trying to escape, even married a year ago. Don't know what I was trying to prove? Foolish girlish dreams, he says, he will stop, will not let us make a mistake, will change our relations, will say that he loves, and not only wants. Stupid. He just fucked me right at the wedding, dragged me into some back room and completely forgot about caution. In those moments I quickly experienced much more pleasure than in the whole short period of our marriage with Valera. Six months later we divorced. And again I became only Uncle Vanina. Just no one can compare with him, no one is up to him. I am ready to be silent, to do unthinkable depraved things, just to feel the blue of his gaze on himself and to hear coarse, but such everything penetrating and everything exciting: “damn, what a sweet you are!”
I drove myself to a standstill, and I myself do not see a way out of this situation. If dad finds out about our relationship, it will be a terrible blow to him. After all, Uncle Vanya, his idol, the best friend who never betrays, will always help and come to the rescue. The best friend fucking his daughter in all crevices. Of course, with her consent, but Dad would hardly consider my desire an excuse ...
Mommy! But why? Why did you leave us so early? Your daughter needs you now! I miss your tenderness and wisdom. After all, I am still quite a girl, a little girl who had plunged herself too early in her forbidden passion. Passion without exit and hope for a happy ending. Let it ride. I take the phone, dial the coveted number, the heart flutters in the chest with a bird caught in a snare. His voice is hoarse and slightly displeased.
“Marya, have you forgotten something?”
I blurted out until I left my determination.
- Uncle Vanya, I'm pregnant!
Silence. There is no strength to listen to silence. This is not what most women hope for by reporting such news. Reset the call and turn off the phone. Let it ride.
When I arrived at the house, the first person I saw was Uncle Vanya, who nervously smoked near the entrance. The word "evil" describes only a fraction of what expressed his face. How did he scold me. I got scared, I don’t know where in the same raincoat, with the phone off, after reporting such news. Sit in his car.
- Uncle Vanya, I do not know how it all happened, forgive me! I was worried about Gosov and diploma, sometimes I forgot to take pills.
Crying He takes my hands in his and watches carefully. There is no anger in his eyes, only sadness. I want to be closer, hug him, putting my nose to the man’s neck.
- My sweet girl, what are we going to do now? Masha ... Masha, I am very guilty before you. I couldn’t even touch you with your finger, but I could not resist. Old goat. But there is something in you that makes you forget all moral taboos and boundaries. You know how to surrender completely and immediately without a trace. Forgetting about the eternal feminine coquetry, about how you look. This fucking accessibility, your always ready and thirsty body, they just drive you crazy. Everything had to be different in your life. You had to go on dates, get flowers, admire the stars, listen to poetry, and not fuck with the old libertine.
“You're not old,” I whisper, and then I kiss and hug him.
The male body trembles under my fingers, and I tremble at its proximity. The kiss becomes different ... greedy, passionate, inflaming. In us desire again boils, fire again inflames.
- Fuck, how sweet you are!
...
Seven years have passed since that memorable day. As then, after meeting him, I sit in the park on a bench and again I have breathing problems. I always do not have enough air when I think of Uncle Van. He died in a car accident four years ago. Until that moment, everything between us remained the same. Of course, Uncle Vanya did not divorce ... for many reasons: he considered marriages with such a large difference in age to be wrong, did not want my father to learn about our relationship, thought he had no right to bind me, did not want to destroy his family and look like a bastard in the eyes of their children. As for me ... I still have not met a man capable of pushing Uncle Vanya out of my body and my heart.
- Mommy, let's go home!
A daughter runs up to me, the blue of her eye penetrates into me, burns ...
Thank you for being in my life, Uncle Vanya.
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I like it. You have your own individual color and style. Write further.
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Glad you liked.
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touching story. whatever this Uncle Vanya is, he will always remain in your heart. it's always like this. He was not a bad person. Just life is such a thing. If you need advice and my help write me a mail .. P. S. I think I can help you.
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Highly. Even more.
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Um ... This is my humble work on you so influenced that you have scored all the words? Or spring aggravation, let's say talkativeness, over?
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No, dear, the aggravation is not over))) The words are over. I took part in this exhausting literary dispute just now, and so did the whole thing.))
Your work, though modest, but very soul-wise, so I decided to strain and speak. Short, but sincerely ...;)
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Thank you for your sincerity,. In your literary disputes, please do not forget: "Kindness will save the world."
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The girl is quite interesting with her experiences. Frames that are created independently. For the sake of your pleasure, you can destroy the lives of all loved ones. Responsibility to them and self-love.
Not bad)
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Thanks for the feedback. To hear from your mouth (hands) the word is not bad, a rarity. Jumping to the ceiling. I hope for a "good" will not pull you, I'm at work, I need to behave decently, and the ceiling is a pity, however, the head too. Smile
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There are more significant critics on the site, I think their reviews will be more pleasant. By the way, you may disagree, but I believe that a child needs both parents. So, I hope she doesn’t ruin the life of her child much. Plus, I doubt that Uncle Vanya's wife was so blind, which means that poison was in her soul. But this is only my obscene tediousness.
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I answer very seriously. Of course, the child needs both parents. But I am a definitive opponent of abortion. This is a crime against the very nature of women. Masha gave her life, and I think it is not enough. After all, life is such an interesting thing.
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We have different views at the moment, but I will not continue the dispute
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I agree with Gorbatov that sometimes it is better to have an abortion, but to raise this topic on this site is stupid))) And the story is nice)
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Thank you dear Kapochka ,. The theme, yes, is very serious and perhaps the site of porn stories is not the place to discuss it. But I can not say. It is necessary to think “before”, and if it happens, it is necessary to give birth, and not to anger God.
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Wah, what a woman !!! Honey, and you did not write it with ebya! So cute. I want a story. 10 balls!
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Thank. I write all my heroines from myself, from my fantasies anyway.
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You have beautiful fantasies ... And the syllable is good.
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Changing roles went to your advantage. With each story, everything is better and more beautiful. Well done Marinochka. I am waiting for the next stories!
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Dear Celestine, thank you. And when you pamper us with your creativity. As for me, I do not promise quickly, there is little free time. Perhaps I will try to write a story on the subject of the project, write a story to everyone on one theme, “The seduction of a girl by a girl!”. Although the topic itself is not very close to me. But on the other hand it is interesting to try yourself in something else.
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Well, I'm writing for myself. I tried for many, but it seems bad. And while I do not see anything that can be put on the general court.
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I am also a categorical opponent of abortion. A story for 10 points
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Thank. I promise there will be no abortions on the pages of my stories. Children are flowers of life.
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Well, the analysis of relations and images, as if, is carried out. I have nothing to say against this. I'll try to add on my own. Yes, the relationship of the characters permeated selfishness and lust. But only? Everyone wants to "grab" for themselves a little more and amuse the soul, while there is an opportunity. Infinitely it can not stretch. The sooner the heroine wakes up from this delusion, the better it will be for her and the child. Built on lies, can not bring happiness to anyone ... But, but ... I do not believe that there was no love. Not everything is one-sided, the medal is always two sides. Just as physical attraction is a part of love, and, conversely, love is, to one degree or another, part of their insane passion. No matter how much the heroes drive these thoughts away from themselves, the denouement must come ... Everything is on it. I will tell the author: how many times she repeated that I would not like it, I was ready for such an outcome. I am glad that reality refuted the assumptions. My ten twelve in a row.
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Thanks Zhenya! What about poems? My voluptuous Masha did not touch your Muse? I thought that you would be ruined by the mate that the hero uses in relation to the heroine. This is all a legacy of my previous tastes and preferences. But bunny, sun and sussy-pusi during sex ... br ... And according to your reviews, I noticed that you are a supporter of a happy ending, but this is a sad story. But I am very glad that I was mistaken, and you liked my story to such an extent that I even deserved 10. Probably the first time ever. Jumping up to the ceiling again ))
As for the relationship between the characters, of course there is a lot of love between them. If it were only lust and passion, had they been together for so many years. Passion without strong feeling fades away very quickly. But you are right on the basis that they had, happiness can not be built. Summary, Dear men, making intrigues with young mistresses, remember that you are breaking their lives. And you, dear girls, starting up tricks with married men, remember that you put your dirty hands and legs into the family, destroying someone's happiness.
All mutual and bright love.!
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Marina You are wrong ...
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Of course not right. Everyone has their own truth and their own view of the world, I do not pretend to truth and objectivity. But everyone, dear Vasily, is curious, in what exactly, in your opinion, am I wrong?
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1. You can not be so unambiguous in their statements - not always having a mistress breaks her life.
2. reading all this is not experienced girls take it as a fact and then they really don’t get into tricks.
3. But in fact it happens that there are no families anymore - there are few cases. and no one knows exactly how this will end.
4. men who have happiness in the family - mistresses will not start. and if it started up, it means that all is not well in the family. our people are used to doing the appearance of happiness - so used that it has become the norm.
5. and that there is no happiness - only a man is not always to blame. why no one will ever say - wives, so that there is happiness in the family and no mistress needs so-and-so. not. everyone says that it is necessary not to climb into someone else's family - the easiest way to think is that it is neither for itself nor for people. from every pret idleness and selfishness.
6. A collective farm is voluntary. You can talk about family and relationships forever. But still, I would not judge so categorically ...
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Of course Vasya, everyone has everything in different ways. But you are certainly right, if there is a discord in the family, two are to blame.
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Vasya, is in solidarity with you, this especially applies to item N 5.
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Do not judge strictly. April, although my month, did not start much. All I wrote in April is the lyrical verse “Sad April”. But while the person is alive, he hopes for the best.
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Well, you, Zhenya, I will just wait when your muse sings.
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the story conquered.
from start to finish.
Umnichka heroine that left the baby. Uncle Vanya, and what Uncle Vanya. well done...
it is a pity of course that they did not agree. but maybe for the better.
great story.
one of the favorite authors here.
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Thank. Just a couple of months ago, it was fantastic for me to hear in my address “one of the favorite authors here.” I hope I will not disappoint later.
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The story is beautiful, I congratulate you, the author! Amazing stress of sexuality, I would say, high voltage! And while not low-grade. Saturated tragic background, but - without overload. Harmonious balance. Very good!
Mat, which I do not like, oddly enough, by the way. With the help of curses, it is possible to show the heat more brightly I also met this technique with other blessed authors, and, as such, it is clear to me and not unpleasant. The only thing that caused a slight bewilderment and a smile, is the epithet "little blyad", in the mouth of the seducer of an inexperienced maiden, in her address. But, again, the heat! :-)
Yes, and let me make a remark about what you have written in the comment.
"... destroying someone's happiness." - I think this is not the right idea about the adjumer. A man is not a ram on a string, which an irresponsible young (or not young) fifa leads away from a happy family. He does not commit adultery against his will, but what kind of family, female happiness of his wife can there be, if the husband wants not her, but another? This is a big misfortune. So, relationships with married people are built on misfortune. Mistresses, these are litmus papers :-) Maybe this is better than living with a latent insult that can come to life when it is even harder to point the husband at the door.
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Dear Spring, thanks for the poetic comment. It is a pleasure to read them, even if our views diverge.Everybody has it all in different ways, but often girls chasing after passions are completely selfish and forget that there are children in these families, children who will be painful to know that dad left them for another woman. As for men, adultery is different, and the man’s polygamous nature, laid by nature, has not been canceled. In my life, I have met many men who cheat on their wives, while claiming that they love only them. These questions can be argued forever and, perhaps, better to do not here, but on the forum.
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Marinochka! My congratulations))) You become ... yes, what is there! already become a new star of the site. And how timidly started))
It's nice to know that life is still there, the road goes forward, someone grows, and someone withdraws from the distance. Great! I really liked it.
Even the analysis does not want to carry out. Good girl!
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There is one more. I would have it on prozy. ru threw, so just on an Internet did not walk, protection of copyright.
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Thank you very much Diana. What a star there, do not flatter me. But I am very grateful to you, because you were the first to support me when I started so timidly. Thank you for that.
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I'm glad I was not mistaken)))
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Excellent written !!!
Read the comments also delivers, the impression that the assessment is not the author, or the story, and Uncle Van and this girl-)))
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You did not like the heroine? What are you so about her, this girl?
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I liked your story, Marina!
And to compile a deep psychological portrait of the characters from a short story, I do not presume.
There is no doubt that girls sometimes fall in love with the mature friends of their fathers.
It happens, that's all-)
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THANK!!! I am glad that you cultivate simply with great speed. Glad you have it)
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I'm glad that they read me, and my humble work is like ...
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You are a star, Marina.
It has long been such.
You write beautifully.
You reveal different facets of relationships.
Masterfully enter, us readers, in their different corners.
You notice a bunch of little things, so important, however.
You have complete stories.
You are beautiful, full of writing about what is important in a relationship.
Why are they like that?
Emotions, feelings, attitudes, body movements, thoughts, inner world, dialogues ...
Everything is very harmonious.
This story is a diamond, of course.
In all its facets.
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Diamond - not everyone will find.
Not everyone will understand.
Will not create.
Pass by.
And may be offended
when another finds
or will create.
Spit.
Write.
To create
Dream.
Live.
To experience.
Write.
Suffer.
Rewrite.
Suffer.
Breathe.
To read.
Write.
Watch from the side.
Write.
Rewrite.
Create.
You are smart, Marina.
Write to. Please.
Publish your book of stories.
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Dear Th1nk, thanks for the poems, today you are beyond competition :)) I am glad that you saw a diamond in my story again. It seems this time the baby also turned out not bad? I am glad that many of them liked my Masha, to be honest, not a single heroine has taken possession of me so much, she still sits in me and does not want to let go, and I am thrilled under the pressure of Uncle Vanini member, now I’m confused, with a stray breath on the bench. Masha, stop being a hooligan! I already have another heroine calling.
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I will be brief - a perfectly deserved "ten")
Thanks you!
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Thank you dear Sanchez, for such a high assessment, It seems to my story that they put only two marks, or 10, or 1. A curious picture.
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I believe that 10 are those who saw a nice style and good spelling, and 1 envious or those who do not want to give you the title of the author of the month and relying on this nice bonus)
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Marina, I want to give you my “fe” - because of your stories, all my work is worth it! I read - I can not tear myself away! I’ll be fired soon for taking all the deadlines! But I can't do anything with myself - your spark is burning very brightly)))))))
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Dear Non-Commentator! Sorry, I am very ashamed that because of my stories all the terms are being broken. I do not promise to kill in myself a spark and suddenly aroused tendency to graphomania. I can only reassure that the next story does not wait soon, at the very much work. :)))
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So if you become to do something with your spark (crush, choke, hide), go on vacation and read your stories before losing your pulse! So know - and let you be ashamed)))))))))
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That's interesting, such laudatory comments, and suddenly the estimate fell to 8, 3. What we really got a rat, putting units, that would lower the rating? To know who! Yes, pull the legs and legs!
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The fact is that 20 dozen are definitely present, which means the rest should be a little more than 6, or several units. In short, bastards!
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Set and will set!
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Dear Censor! It is your right to put units. However, I would like to hear an explanation. What did you dislike about the story and why it deserves such an assessment. And the unit is put just like that, just the malice of your soul.
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No brainer that no matter what it is, “Censor”, but a rat who constantly lives, like many of us, on the site and skillfully disguises its envy and malice under good faith. I think the administration has enough technical means and opportunities to identify this person. DEAR ADMINISTRATION, read this comment as a message addressed to you !!
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DEAR ADMINISTRATION! In case of detection among female rats, female envoys with the following parameters (height from 165; breast size 2-4; long legs; comely external data), please officially give me the authority to punish them!
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:))))) Comedian. I wanted to be a rat. Whether or not one unit should be put to everyone. Ah, the former inclinations do not let go ..
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I put 10 yesterday when I wrote a comment. But the number of assessments has changed, and the average score remains the same. Today from the page of Tim tried to put 10 - the same picture. The number varies, the average score is not.
Again, questions to the site administration? What's happening?
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Top marks are about thirty.
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Here I read the verse that you wrote,
and would add the word “experience” before “rewrite” in the last column.
Well I am meticulous. After all, you have to worry a lot when you write and create.
Now about childbirth ...
Sori for pelvic presentation in the last comment, before. story.
Probably overdone.
And you have a beautiful baby.
The child is part of you.
Now about the site.
Awesome site.
Find what you want.
You can and podro ..., also enjoyment.
And you can survive, be inspired, enjoy ...
And further: to each his own.
About ratings ...
Some people probably feel your creations, but can not create a masterpiece.
Stupidly take revenge.
They know that stupid, disgusting, but they do.
Or do not feel fully.
After all, the world is for middle peasants ...
Clever - like outcasts.
Feel more, suffer more.
More wrong, because more often they splash their splash somewhere.
But big live.
And this is joy.
Find your harmony.
Smart live with smart.
Inet - a great thing - you can throw out the idea, feelings incognito.
Who is missing.
You.
Write. Please
Save diamonds. Publish a book.
Pushing you?
And right!
You are a super woman.
Definitely a woman.
Such thoughts, feelings, and emotions can only be transmitted by She.
As for me - a man takes globality,
woman - wealth of relationships.
We are different.
And how do we connect ... Wow !!!
I still want to.
I go to my wife ...
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Dear Th1nk, I promise I will write my stories, if only because you leave such comments. Thank. And at the expense of the book, this is not serious, this is not literature, but, as you said, a splash of feelings, fantasies and sensations ... But I’m absolutely glad that this splash finds understanding and admiration in someone. Say hello to your wife, she is lucky.
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A survey is conducted: Is it worth it to prohibit rating for the guests of the site?
Please express your position, vote and Comments:
https://eroticspace.info/forum/threads/120/#post-2360
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Moloch, you are a true friend.
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Very sensual and well-written story ...
Colleague, great!)
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Colleague, glad to like it.
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worthy of ... 10
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An interesting story in your style. I'm about domination. Do not feed you bread, just let me write about the sweet heart theme.
I did not understand the truth that besides sex, the heroes had such that the heroine, even after death, could not push him out of the heart. Although who will understand you women, your boundless and many-sided soul for me as before is dark and not understandable. Well, okay.
Condemning the heroes and clapping on paper their "invaluable" moral principles regarding the events of the story will not. This is life and what it just does not happen.
Thanks for the story, as before hooked for the soul. Ten? Probably yes.
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Thanks for the comment dear Chitaka. This story was originally conceived as pure porn, but I can’t write pure, I need to decorate it with emotions, etc. From the story it’s really not entirely clear what happened between the characters except passion, I left this moment behind the scenes. As I see each other, there was a feeling between them that is commonly called love. And true love and real passion is hard to find a substitute for. And when the person with whom this feeling was still dying is almost impossible, you unwittingly begin to idealize it. This is how I see the emotions and feelings of the heroine. Dominance here is quite a bit, but you are right, my sexual preferences erupt in this story.
I advise you to read my previous story. He is almost a romantic. Oh, there is no hero there she slaps her on the Pope ) I am incorrigible
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At the expense of the book.
I do not agree.
I reread a huge pile of books.
I try to read further.
Of course, there are preferences, favorite authors, themes ...
There are novels that can be considered complete:
remembered, inspired, aroused, pleased, tuned to the creative way,
taught and so on
But...
Can there be a relationship without sex?
Maybe sex without a relationship?
You fresh romance is not tired without sex?
And fresh sex without relationship pleases?
Why are there such sites?
Because we are overgrown with puritanism, bigotry, fear.
And here, under the nickname, you open up some kind of your face.
Anxious, important, personal, regarding sex.
Regarding the lack of sex and relationships.
There is a shortage of normal personal and sexual relationships in books.
Such books have long matured in the desires of people.
A book filled with meaning, relationships, sex - Pandora’s Box
which everyone wants to open and read. EVERYTHING!
Today, yes, it's too early to publish a book ...
But ... Forge, grind the edges / I think they shine flawlessly, much further ... /
You will continue to grow anyway if you write.
Gift, scent, scent, vision, harmony, beauty - everything is there.
Time, pen and paper you need. Or a keyboard.
And the atmosphere that spins and inspires ... Save diamonds, our charm.
And give the book later on the mountain
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At the expense of comments.
I do not agree with Moloch.
I will write later on the forum
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Crunchy!
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I would add why the heroine could not find a replacement.
Too bright feelings, experiences, relationships, sex,
(with pain) she worried.
It is very hard for a replacement to be found.
Sometimes only a memory to help.
Which dulls, smoothes, helps to forget.
And that is not always.
A person can get used to living with thought and talking in private.
with his memory and with his feelings.
All the same, even so, this is happiness.
This kind of happiness.
Because there is no replacement.
Maybe it will still, happiness, maybe not.
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Dear Th1nk, you feel so thin. Thank. I hope and will not disappoint you further. And I will issue wonderful diamond kids.
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Dear administration. Thank you so much for reacting. I hope that only units sent from the same IP address were removed. However, the people were outraged by the voting system itself, which, in my opinion, needs reform. And if you remove the units then to everyone, and not only in individual cases, which caused dissatisfaction of the readers.
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Yes, these are not emotions, but feelings. And another drama - psychologically finely written. Fine.
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Thanks Serezha. for appreciation. Drama is not a drama, but anything can happen in life, and such a story could well happen. Certain people leave an indelible mark on our lives.
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I am pretty sure that such or a similar story to her could not only happen, but also happens quite often.
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It happens) I am now absolutely in the same situation, for 3 years already. And yes, a certain kind of happiness) Conscience hurts from time to time, but it is impossible to refuse. My wife is not sorry. It is a pity that all when it ends. And the dependence is of course. And the rules of meetings are clearly the same))))))
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Dear Nick. Of course, many girls are in similar situations as you and the heroine of the story. I want to remind the words of the hero: “Everything had to be different in your life. You had to go on dates, get flowers, admire the stars and listen to the poems. ” Please do not deprive yourself of this. Maybe you will have better luck and you will be able to meet a man who can push him out of your body and your heart. I sincerely hope that your life will develop happily. And at the expense of "my wife is not sorry." Just put yourself in her place. Good luck.
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Amazing !!! You have talent. Probably the best work on the site.
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Thank. Everyone has different tastes. But there are many good authors on the site.Read the stories of Man - that’s really talent.
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I have no words! Awesome!
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Glad you liked Lyudochka. "Uncle Vanya" and it seems to me one of the most successful of my works. To him I have an inexplicable weakness, although his characters are completely a figment of my imagination.
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In general, the story is not bad. But what jarred me was the fact that the heroine gave herself up at her own wedding, this is how you should not respect your chosen one to do this.
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Yes, certainly an act ugly. I do not condone the heroine, but she did not love her chosen one, only used it. This happens in life, an attempt to escape from itself and a strong hopeless feeling.
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I read, the story is bold, interesting and almost without snot. But that's why Uncle Vanya talks to a girl like that? This is somehow implausible, have you decided that this story will become tougher, sharper, sharper?
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Dima, I will answer sincerely, the hero speaks like this to the girl because the author of the story excites the use of certain abusive words during sex scenes, and gives rise to a combination of rudeness and tenderness. I didn’t decide anything to please someone, I wrote it the way I like to feel and feel. Maybe it jarred you, I fully admit, we are all different. Here you are generally honest about yourself wrote "Another Dmitry".
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This is what you are hinting at, dear? Is something wrong with my nickname or what?
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Oh, why do your heroes die ?! I liked the story very much, although the heroine, in contrast to the heroine of the previous story I have read, is kind of mechanical. Although it may just be a contrast with a gap of emotions before, when I read your “Don't Cry, Durynda.” Thank you very much. I'm your fan.
Respectfully,
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Thanks again for the comment. My heroes are far from dying, just to be honest in this story I didn’t see the future of the heroes, so there was such a ending. And she is not a mechanical heroine, just a different personality type is described here, Masha she is driven by life, and Marina - she rebels, therefore her emotions may seem brighter.
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